Synthesis Essay Notes

Synthesis Essay

Overview

  • The synthesis essay requires engaging in an ongoing conversation about an issue, similar to joining a party conversation.
  • It involves examining different perspectives on an issue, like a stakeholder's activity.
  • It requires identifying and analyzing viewpoints from various sources such as articles, editorials, reports, and visual media.
  • The goal is to formulate your own argument or analysis about the issue.
  • You must use viewpoints from the provided sources to support your argument or analysis.

Writing Directions

  • Take a Position: Formulate an essay that explains whether high schools, in general or a specific school/district, should mandate community service.
  • Incorporate references or quotations from at least three sources.
  • Analyze an Issue: Compose an essay that examines the factors a school district should consider before implementing a mandatory community service requirement for high school graduation.
  • Incorporate references or quotations from at least three sources.

Recognizing Complexity

  • Topics on the exam will be complex, with multiple perspectives.
  • Your argument or analysis should recognize the complexities of the topic.
  • Anticipate objections to your position.
  • For "Take a position" directions, take a clear stance and identify the main points to consider.
  • For "Identify the factors" directions, address all factors presented in the documents.

Incorporating Sources: Take a Position

  • Put sources in conversation within each body paragraph; aim for two sources per paragraph.
  • Alternating: Place opposing sources in a paragraph by conceding to an opposing viewpoint or identifying its limitations, then refuting it with evidence from another source.
  • Block: Place complementary sources together in a paragraph to build on each other and support your claim.

Incorporating Sources: Identify the Factors

  • Put sources in conversation within each body paragraph; aim for two sources per paragraph.
  • Option #1: Each body paragraph addresses a factor identified from the documents. Incorporate two sources that build on each other, addressing the same factor but providing different information.
  • Option #2: Each body paragraph focuses on a factor identified from the documents. Incorporate two sources that may agree, disagree, or qualify some point about the factor.

Analyzing Sources

  • As you read each source, analyze:
    • What claim is the source making about the issue?
    • What data or evidence does the source provide for the claim?
    • What are the limitations and implications of the claims and evidence?
    • How credible is the source?
    • Which other sources does this source agree or disagree with?

Citing Sources

  • AP readers will look for citations after direct quotations or paraphrases.
  • Include some context explaining the author(s) or content of the source.
  • Examples of citations:
    • According to Source D, …
    • In Smith’s opinion, …
    • A survey of recent graduates (Source D) shows that …
    • “25% of recent high school graduates view their high school community service experiences as rewarding” (Smith).

Essay Requirements

  • Consider all lenses represented in the sources and address them in your essay (usually three).
  • Cite at least three sources within the essay.
  • Avoid merely summarizing sources; instead, quote or paraphrase them and explain how they support your claim/thesis.
  • Assess the credibility of the sources.

Introduction

  • Content & Format:
    • Begin with an attention grabber.
    • Address background (what the reader needs to know) and context (the ongoing conversation about the issue).
    • State your thesis.
  • Avoid using the same language as the prompt.

Introduction Example: Take a Position

  • Attention-grabbing opening: Reluctance to try new experiences and the saying "You won’t know unless you try."
  • Background: School district’s decision to implement mandatory community service.
  • Counterargument: Some argue mandatory volunteerism corrupts the spirit of service.
  • Thesis: High school should require equitable and accessible community service to instill civic responsibility and encourage a lifelong habit of helping others.

Introduction Example: Identify the Factors

  • Attention-grabbing opening: Reluctance to try new experiences and the saying "You won’t know unless you try."
  • Background: School district’s decision to implement mandatory community service.
  • Counterargument: Some argue mandatory volunteerism corrupts the spirit of service.
  • Thesis: School districts should consider accessibility of volunteer opportunities, equity in what counts as service, and effective implementation of service programs.

Body Paragraphs

  • Content & Format:
    • State a claim or idea in support of your thesis; explain or clarify the claim.
    • Incorporate evidence from the sources to support your claim: paraphrase or directly quote your sources (two per paragraph).
    • Cite your sources.
    • Explain how the source supports your claim or idea.
    • Connect to the thesis by explaining what the evidence means in relation to the thesis.

Body Paragraph Example: Take a Position

  • Claim: It is a school district’s responsibility to create citizens who will contribute positively to society through community service.
  • Counterargument and Source: Some argue that mandating community service devalues the service (Rodgers and Hamilton).
  • Rebuttal and Source: Students often recognize the value of service and continue to serve into adulthood. According to Source A, 72% of Valhalla High School seniors who participated in mandatory community service reported that the experience was positive and that they thought they would seek volunteer opportunities after graduating.
  • Further Evidence and Source: 30% of those seniors surveyed said that no one in their family participates in a volunteer program (Source A). A Harvard University study found that people who regularly help others “have increased productivity at work and score higher on happiness tests” (Achor).
  • Connection to Thesis: Mandatory volunteer programs create citizens who feel a responsibility to contribute to their community, which is a benefit, not a burden.

Body Paragraph Example: Identify the Factors

  • Topic: It is important for school districts to consider the accessibility of volunteer opportunities if they want the experience to be positive for all students.
  • Evidence and Source: The graph in Source D shows that the highest percentage of students volunteered when the events were at the school itself and on school days (80% for peer tutoring).
  • Counter Evidence and Source: Only 15% of students helped out at a community fair, which took place on the weekend at a community center not accessible by public transportation.
  • Evidence and Source: In Source B, interviews reveal that students mostly learn about volunteer opportunities from older siblings or friends.
  • Connection to Thesis: The district must ensure all students know about and can participate in the volunteer opportunities for the program to be a positive and equitable experience, otherwise, the program may just cause resentment among students and distaste for service.

Conclusion

  • Content:
    • Summarize the argument and main idea.
    • Address implications/