Notes on Default Subject Matters in Fiction

Default Modes in Beginning Fiction

• New writers often use common images, phrases, and story ideas.
• These can seem unoriginal to experienced readers.
• To improve, writers should recognize and move beyond these typical patterns.
• Many subjects have predictable, overused versions.
• Writers should try to find a new and unique way to approach these subjects.

The Dead Grandmother Story

• This is a common story for beginners: a nice grandmother is remembered at her wake.
• Problems include: simple, overly sweet views of the grandmother; too much sad language; and too many tears.
• The story often switches between the wake and memories of the grandmother.
• Writers should avoid clichés and try to show real, complex emotions.
• Suggested readings: Faulkner’s As I Lay Dying; Marly Swick’s A Hole in the Language.

The Big Game (Sports as a Story)

• Many sports stories focus too much on the game itself and use clichés.
• TV often shows game details better; readers don’t usually want a play-by-play in writing.
• Good sports stories use the sport to show the characters' feelings and growth.
• The characters' personal stories should be the main focus.
• Notable readings: Ann Packer’s Horse; Million Dollar Baby: Stories from the Corner (F. X. Toole); Owen King’s Wonders; Patricia Highsmith’s The Barbarians; Leigh Allison Wilson’s Massé.

Short Stories about Short Stories

• Some stories are about writing stories, often with a character who can't decide what to write.
• These can seem too focused on themselves and not fully developed.
• The idea might be interesting but doesn't go deep enough.
• While these types of stories can be good, beginners often struggle to make them engaging.

Overall Takeaway for Writers

• Recognize common story patterns and try to avoid them.
• Don’t