EMAILS

Writing Emails: Comprehensive Study Notes

  • Written communication types include: Email, Letters, Proposals, Memos, Faxes. (Page 2)
  • Emails are rapidly changing and have revolutionized business communication; usable for personal and professional contexts (friends, family, partners, colleagues). (Page 3)
  • A professional/formal email address can influence credibility and is often one of the first impressions you give to teachers, employers, and contacts. (Page 4)
  • Professional email address structures (avoid nicknames for professional use):
    • First name last name (johnsmith@yourwebsite.Com)
    • First name only (john@yourwebsite.Com)
    • First initial last name (jsmith@yourwebsite.Com)
    • First name last initial (johns@yourwebsite.Com)
    • Examples: fairlady1989@yahoo.com or rocketman9786@gmail.com
    • Rule of thumb: Leave nicknames for personal communication. (Page 5)

Elements of a Formal Email

  • To: enter the exact email address of your recipient. (Page 6)
  • CC: carbon copy (visible to all recipients). (Page 6)
  • BCC: blind carbon copy (hidden from other recipients). BCC allows concealment of recipients from others. (Page 6)

Crafting an Effective Subject Line

  • Purpose: to catch the reader’s attention; be brief and specific; avoid UPPERCASE. (Page 7)
  • Examples:
    • Application for the Post of Sales Associate
    • Free workshop: Introduction to Salesforce
    • Workshop Reminder: Effective Communication
    • Requesting Project X Idea Submissions
    • Re: Promotion Campaign (Page 7)

Email Interface Quick Reference (Elements in a typical email compose window)

  • Fields: To, Cc, Bcc, Attach, Subject, Send/Discard; options may include encryption. (Page 8)
  • Practical reminder: always add a subject before sending. (Page 8, implied by interface guidance)

Starting the Email: Greeting

  • The greeting depends on the formality of the relationship:
    • Dear Sir/Madam
    • Dear Mr. Perera
    • Dear Human Resource Manager
    • To whom it may concern (Page 9)

The Body: How to Write the Main Message

  • If initiating communication, be clear early in the email. Use concise language and direct statements. (Page 10)
  • Example opening lines:
    • I am writing in response to your article/ advertisement/letter …
    • I am writing with regard to …
    • I am writing to enquire about …
    • I am writing to complain about …
    • I am writing to request … (Page 10)

Clarity and Brevity in the Body

  • Keep the message short and to the point; remove unnecessary information; present the most relevant details first due to readers’ limited time. (Page 11)
  • Use short paragraphs (3–5 sentences). (Page 11)

Attachments: How to Refer to Them

  • Common phrases to indicate attachments:
    • Herewith attached is the …
    • Herewith I have attached the …
    • Please find attached …
    • I have attached the document you requested
    • I have attached the relevant documents. (Page 12)

Replying to an Email: Polite Acknowledgments

  • Useful phrases when replying:
    • Thank you for contacting
    • Thank you for your prompt reply.
    • Thank you for inquiring about our new email marketing enterprise application.
    • Noted with thanks
    • Received with thanks (Page 13)

Ending the Email: Closings and Contact Details

  • Closing options: best regards, kind regards, sincerely, cheers. Include contact details and proofread for typos. (Page 14)

Phrases to End the Email: Formal Closings

  • Examples include:
    • Thank you for taking this into consideration.
    • I look forward to seeing you next week.
    • Looking forward to hearing from you.
    • I would appreciate your reply.
    • Let me know if you need any help.
    • Thank you for taking your time,
    • Hope to hear from you soon.
    • Thank you for your patience/time/cooperation. (Page 15)

Practical Email Samples

  • Sample 1: Invitation to a birthday party (personal email)
    • To: xyz
    • Cc/bcc: (none)
    • Subject: invitation to a birthday party
    • Body: Hi Sera! Hope this mail finds you in the best of your time. I am very happy to invite you to my birthday party on Nov 03 at ABC hotel from 7:00 pm to 10:00 pm. The theme of the birthday party is ‘Pirate of the Caribbean’. It would be great if you come and join us at the party. We will have a great time and fun together. See you soon. Lynda
    • (Page 16)
  • Sample 2: Informing classmates about intra-college quiz competition (informal to formal conversion optional)
    • Subject: Intra-college quiz competition
    • Content includes date/time, location, and invitation to participate; closing by Peter (Class representative). (Page 17)
  • Sample 3: Resignation email
    • Subject: Resignation Letter
    • Content: Notice of resignation with one-month notice, appreciation for opportunities, request for final schedule and benefits, closing. (Page 18)

Task 2: Formal vs Casual Phrases

  • Examples to classify as formal or casual:
    • Hi / Thank you for your consideration. (Casual vs semi-formal depending on tone)
    • Dear …, I am writing in reference to… (Formal)
    • Thank you for contacting XYZ Company. (Formal)
    • I look forward to hearing from you (Formal)
    • Best regards, (Formal)
    • Thanks for getting back to me. (Casual)
    • Sincerely, (Formal)
    • I am writing to enquire about (Formal)
    • cheers, (Casual/very informal in business contexts)
    • Best wishes, love, Thank you, if you have any questions or concerns, don’t hesitate to let me know. (Mix of formal and casual depending on audience)
      (Page 19)

Email Etiquette and Best Practices

  • Do have a clear subject line; Do use a professional salutation (Dear, Hello); Do not use casual greetings like hey, yo, or hi. (Page 20)
  • Do not use humour in formal communications. Do proofread. Do not assume the recipient already knows what you are talking about. Do reply to all emails when appropriate. Do not overuse exclamation points. (Page 20)
  • Use active links and the power of the internet; Use correct attachments; Proofread. (Page 21)

Practical Sample: Conference Center Inquiry

  • A formal inquiry email example:
    • Dear Sir/Madam,
    • I am writing to enquire about the time for the conference center in Colombo. Our company is hosting a delegation from Japan and is interested in booking the center for an important corporate event on 24extthextDecember,202424^{ ext{th}} ext{ December }, 2024. I checked your website but could not find the information I require. If you could kindly send the timings when the conference center is available, we can design a schedule at the earliest and share the schedule with you to initiate the booking procedure. Looking forward to an early response. Thank you.
    • A.D. Jayathilake
    • Human Resource Manager, ABS Company (pvt) Ltd. (Page 22)

Editing and Improving Emails: Mistakes and Revisions

  • Identify common mistakes in informal emails:

    • Overly casual tone, excessive punctuation and slang (e.g., ALL CAPS, emoticons, abbreviations like B4, xtra, coz, BTW, u).
    • Sharing personal trauma or sensitive information that’s not appropriate for a professional email.
    • Inconsistent capitalization, informal sign-offs, and lack of structure.
    • Informal greetings and closing lines that do not suit a professional context. (Page 23)
  • Formal revision: Convert the informal email into a professional one. Suggested approach:

    • Subject: Inquiry about courses for university students
    • Dear Jack,
    • My name is Jaana [Last Name], from Finland. I would like to inquire about courses for university students offered by your program. Could you please provide information on class schedules (number of lessons per week), available extracurricular activities or trips, and any other relevant details?
    • I look forward to your reply.