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Your Revised Shark Tank-Style Pitch for Origins

Here is your pitch rewritten in that style. Short, emotional, visual, and built for a live presentation.

Slide 1: Title

Origins

Stand where the song began. Finish what it started.

[Your Name]

Slide 2: The Hook (30 seconds)

You:

"I have a question for you.

Have you ever listened to a song and thought—'I could have written that verse'? Or 'I wish I could show this artist what their music means to me'?

I have. Hundreds of times.

And I am not alone. There are millions of people out there—songwriters, singers, producers—sitting in their bedrooms, dreaming of a chance to work with the artists they love.

But right now? There is no pathway. No door. Just a wall."

Slide 3: The Problem (30 seconds)

Visual: A simple image of a wall. Artist on one side. Listener on the other.

You:

"Here is the problem.

Artists release music. Fans consume it. Maybe you leave a comment. Maybe you buy a t-shirt. But that is where it ends.

There is no real way for a fan to contribute to the art they love. And artists? They are sitting on a goldmine of talent inside their own fanbases—but they have no way to find it.

That wall is keeping millions of talented people in their bedrooms. And it is keeping artists from discovering their next great collaborator.

So we decided to tear it down."

Slide 4: The Solution – Origins (30 seconds)

Visual: The wall cracks. Light pours through. Artist and listener stand together.

You:

"Meet Origins.

It is an AR platform that connects the places where songs are born to the fans who want to finish them.

It works in two phases. And it is going to change everything."

Slide 5: Phase 1 – The Lens (30 seconds)

Visual: Mockup of app. A lyric floating over a park bench.

You:

"Phase One: The Lens.

An artist pins a lyric to the exact place that inspired it. A park bench. A café. A street corner.

A fan walks to that spot. They point their phone. And the lyric floats in the air in front of them. They hear the artist's voice. They stand where the song was born."

Slide 6: Phase 2 – The Unfinished Invitation (30 seconds)

Visual: Same view, but a button appears: "This lyric is unfinished. Can you finish it?"

You:

"Phase Two: The Unfinished Invitation.

That lyric? It is incomplete on purpose. The artist posts a challenge: 'This song needs a second verse. Write yours from where you are standing.'

The fan writes. Records. Submits. And then they wait."

Slide 7: The Golden Ticket (30 seconds)

Visual: An envelope opens. Text: "Your verse was chosen. Let's make a song together. 50/50 split. Full credit."

You:

"Weeks later, a message: 'Your verse was chosen. Let's make a song together.'

This is not a prize. This is a contract. A 50/50 revenue split. Equal writing credit. A professional collaboration.

That fan just became a featured artist. Their life just changed.

And the artist? They just found their next collaborator—inside their own community."

Slide 8: Why This Works – The Magic (30 seconds)

You:

"This is not just an app. It solves three big things.

One. It gives fans a real way to engage. Not a like button. A chance to create.

Two. It gives artists fresh ideas and a direct pipeline to discover new talent.

Three. It turns cities into living anthologies. Every park bench becomes a story. Every street corner becomes a destination.

We are not building another streaming app. We are building a new way to make music. Together."

Slide 9: The Market – This Is Big (30 seconds)

Visual: Bold numbers.

• 600 million streaming subscribers

• 15 million aspiring musicians in the U.S. alone

• $5 billion music tourism market

• $50 billion AR market by 2028

You:

"And the market? Massive.

Six hundred million people stream music. Fifteen million of them are actively trying to break into music.

Music tourism is a five-billion-dollar industry. AR is a fifty-billion-dollar industry by 2028.

Origins sits at the center of all of it. This scales."

Slide 10: The Hard Stuff – We Thought About It (30 seconds)

Visual: Simple icons with short text.

• Safety: Pins expire. Artists get alerts. Anon submissions.

• Fair Pay: 50/50 split. Micro-tipping. Community fund.

• Access: Non-AR mode. Virtual visits. Library partnerships.

• Global: Launching in Lagos, São Paulo, Seoul, Mumbai.

You:

"Look, we know there are challenges. Geolocation can be tricky. Fair pay matters. Not everyone has the latest phone.

We thought about all of it.

Pins expire. Artists control their locations. Listeners can submit anonymously. We have a non-AR mode for older devices. Virtual visits for people who cannot travel.

And fair pay? Built into the platform. 50/50 split. Micro-tipping for strong submissions. A community fund for creators who do not win.

We are building this for everyone."

Slide 11: The Ask (15 seconds)

Visual: Clean. The amount you need.

You:

"So here is the ask.

We are looking for [amount] to build the MVP, onboard our first 50 artists, and launch in five cities across three continents.

With your support, we turn Origins from a vision into a reality."

Slide 12: Closing – The Story That Stays With You (45 seconds)

Visual: A warm, human image. A park bench. A city street. A person smiling at their phone. Text: "Stand where the song began. Finish what it started."

You (slow down. Make it personal.):

"I want to leave you with one story.

A young woman walks to a park bench in Brooklyn. She points her phone. A lyric from her favorite artist floats in the air: 'I wrote this here, thinking about the father I lost.'

She sits down. She writes her own verse. She records it, with the sound of the park around her. She submits it.

Three weeks later, a message: 'Your verse was chosen. Let's make a song together.'

That is not a contest. That is not a marketing gimmick.

That is a new way of making music. One where the wall between artist and listener comes down. Where a park bench becomes a studio. Where a fan becomes a collaborator.

Origins turns every city into a living anthology. Every listener into a possible co-author.

We are not building another music app. We are building a new geography of creativity.

And I would love for you to be part of it.

Thank you."

Slide 13: Thank You / Contact

Visual: App logo. Your name. Email.

Summary: Shark Tank Style = 3 Things