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All I know is a door into the dark.
The Forge - Starting point, unknown, struggle
Inside, the hammered anvil's short-pitched ring, the unpredictable fantail of sparks
The Forge - Sounds of hard work, spontaneous idea creation
The anvil must be somewhere in the centre, horned as a unicorn, at one end square, set there immovable:
The Forge - lasts forever -> admiration/envy
An altar where he expends himself in shape and music
The Forge - Balletic/graceful image
Sometimes, leather-aproned, hairs in his nose, he leans out on the jamb,
The Forge - Ungraceful, ugly/frightening contrasting image
Then grunts and goes in, with a slam and flick to beat real iron out, to work the bellows.
The Forge - Refining the idea into blacksmith's masterpiece
There was a sunlit absence.
I. Sunlight - Opening line
Water honeyed // in the slung bucket and the sun stood like a griddle cooling against the wall of each long afternoon.
I. Sunlight - Setting, enjambment, idealised memory
The reddening stove sent its plaque of heat against where she stood in a floury apron by the window.
I. Sunlight - Halo effect -> angelic, implicit colour (white, yellow, beige)
Now she dusts the board with a goose's wing
I. Sunlight - Metaphor for dusting the board with flour, elevating everyday acts
Here is space again, the scone rising to the tick of two clocks.
I. Sunlight - reference to the process of writing poetry/giving life to creation, reference to the first line
The 'spud' of the dynamo gleaming and cocked back, the pedal treads hanging relieved of the boot of the law.
A Constable Calls - Implication of violence + pressure
Arithmetic and fear, I sat staring at the polished holster
A Constable Calls - Fear of the law
But was there not a line of turnips where the seed ran out in the potato field?
A Constable Calls - narrator begins to ruminate over small details
I assumed small guilts and sat imagining the black hole in the barracks,
A Constable Calls - terror, child heightens it
His boot pushed off and the bicycle ticked, ticked, ticked.
A Constable Calls - Bomb-like sound -> troubles; Powerful defeating the weak
There we were in the vaulted tunnel running
The Underground - Opening scene, extended metaphor for the underworld and the story of Orpheus and Eurydices
And me, me then like a fleet god gaining upon you before you turned to a reed
The Underground - Apprehensions, Physical love and the unknown
Some new white flower japped with crimson
The Underground - Innocence/Purity -> Virginity; Change, are they making a mistake
I come as Hansel came on the moonlit stones, retracing the path back, lifting the buttons
The Underground - Shift in time, trusts his decision
Bared and tensed as I am, all attention for your step following and damned if I look back.
The Underground - won't make the same mistake as orpheus, fully trusts his decision
Up, black, striped and damasked like the chasuble at a funeral mass, the skunk's tail paraded the skunk.
The Skunk - Opening line, unusual for a love poem
The refrigerator whinnied into silence. My desk light softened beyond the verandah.
The Skunk - Alone, spotlight
After eleven years I was composing love-letters again, broaching the word 'wife' like a stored cask,
The Skunk - almost a return to the underground, matures/gets better over time
And there she was, the intent and glamorous, ordinary, mysterious skunk, mythologized, demythologized, snuffing the boards five feet beyond me.
The Skunk - Seeing his wife after an extended period of time and how his appreciation still exists but in another form
Your head-down, tail-up hunt in a bottom drawer for the black plunge-line nightdress.
The Skunk - His wife takes on the appearance of the skunk
'I'll just run out and get him. The weather here's so good, he took the chance to do a bit of weeding.'
A Call - His Dad still acts like if he were younger
So I saw him down on his hands and knees beside the leek rig, touching, inspecting, separating one stalk from the other
A Call - Silence, humility, fragility, care linking to precision and skill
Gently pulling up everything not tapered, frail and leafless, pleased to feel each little weed-root break, but rueful also...
A Call - Metaphor for his old-age and self-awareness
Then found myself listening to the amplified grave ticking of hall clocks
A Call - mortality, hall clocks will at one point stop ticking
Next thing he spoke and I nearly said I loved him.
A Call - Poignant closing line, filled with love and regret